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The animation wasn't that bad but definitely needs improvement on the flow and combat. Sound effects and music were done perfectly and fit the dbz world perfectly. The voice acting is GOD AWFUL and absolutely inexcusable given the thousands of talented voice actors who do free work on the net. in fact the animation deeply suffers from this and should have had no voice acting if it was going to be this terrible. The shading could use a bit more work so that it would bring out the colors more. I advise cell shading if your going for that exact dbz look also more defined outlines would help to. Gohans voice actor was the only tolerable one. Some of the attacks looked oddly animated such as when cooler kicked trucks perhaps a different angle would have been better. Its definitively a great animation just needs to be a bit refined more. Fire these voice actors.

bocodamondo responds:

on the voice acting subject, i think sirundead did a great vegeta, especially considering the fact he was sick when he recorded the lines,
and kaggy also did great as bardock. same goes for tomsthevoice as nail,
if you only say those (the ones i named above) are bad because they are not 100% exactly like the dbz dub, then get the hell out of my face....

sigh

short but good

Pretty good. Work on it and you'll get better. MIc quality also could use a huge step up. The animation isn't "too bad" but definitely needs improvement as far as the lines are concerned. The lines could be a bit cleaner and this would allow the colors to "pop" more. You could use a bit of anatomy and body structure practice as certain angles in this animation just seem unnatural and kind of rushed. If you couldn't pull off the angle simply discard it and use a different one. But these are just my advice and criticisms. I'f I had to give some positives I would say it is a interesting intro to a channel but definitively needs to be a bit more polished if expected to be taken seriously, excepcially in the mic quality.

Very inspiring

TaraGraphika responds:

Thank you for the Fiver~~

The fact that this isn't number 1 on the front page may be one of newgrounds biggest mistakes.

Chaosphoenix88 responds:

Bro thanks. This is kind of why I went to dojo.

THIS IS AMAZING. A MASTERPIECE WHEN CAN WE SEE MORE? DO YOU NEED VOICE WORK ANYTHING? PLEASE MAKE MORE OF THESE

Chaosphoenix88 responds:

Yeah man. I actually do need help with voice work. I will definitely keep you posted bro.

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